Admittedly, I feel the colours might be a bit too bombastic in this one…

Though most of them are the same colours I’ve used in the previous pages, and they worked fine there. So I guess it’s due to a faulty composition here.

Which is a shame, because, if you’ve noticed, each frame is separated by the outlines of certain body parts of Stobyx. Like the first frame is shaped like Stobyx’ head.

Don’t worry, I’m not going to make a habit of this kind of frame composition in this chapter.


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